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Five Edits for Sentimentality

By Rachel Palmer

September 19, 2018 by OoliganPress Leave a Comment

Five Edits for Sentimentality

I sat next to a woman on a cross-country flight who read Fifty Shades of Grey from cover to cover with such rapt attention that she didn’t respond to the flight attendant. When we landed, the woman looked confused and not too happy to step back into real life. She collected her things with the glazed, glassy eyes of the fictive spell.

Filed Under: Editing Tagged With: audience, developmental editing, Editing, fictive spell, pacing, point of view, sentimentality, structure, target audience, tense, timing

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